Hello readers! Today at inquiry miss mcclelland told us to do a D.L.O about our solar system.
i really enjoyed doing it my favorite part about it was writing the facts.
I am a Year 5 student in the Uru Mānuka Cluster. My teacher is Miss McClelland. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first drafts. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
To support my learning I ask you to comment as follows:
1. Something positive - Begin with a greeting. Talk about something you like about what I have shared.
2. Thoughtful - A comment that will mean something to me to let me know you read/watched or listened to what I had to say. - use any language.
3. Something helpful - Give me some ideas for next time or ask me a question.
Encourage me to make another post.
Hi Om
ReplyDeleteThanks for sharing your DLO about the planets. I really liked how you used bullet points to show each new fact. Visually this made your slides look very professional. I also liked how you balanced each page by having a picture on one side and the txt on the other.
Hope you have been ok during lockdown. I am really looking forward to getting back to school soon and seeing you all again.